1. K1: The most frequent 1000 words of English
2. K2: The second most frequent 1000 words of English
3. AWL: The 570 most frequently used words in academic texts
4. Off-list: The remainder which are not found in categories 1,2 or 3
By looking at the results from this analysis, I can improve my text by using different words. This is the result from the analysis of the initial text:
WEB VP OUTPUT FOR FILE: Day Chocolate
Words recategorized by user as 1k items (proper nouns etc): NONE (total 0 tokens)
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When comparing my results, it is clearly visible that I am not a native speaker.The results from an educated native speaker of English would be 70% on K1 and 10% on each of the remaining categories.
Now it is time to upgrade the text to make it more academical. This can be done by looking at another function of the VP: The Token List.
The Toke List provides me with an overview of what words I used and from what sublist these words are. The following words are the AWL words that I used in my text.
Sublist 1
created environmentally establish establish major responsiveness
created environmentally establish establish major responsiveness
Sublist 2
achieve assists consuming maintain normal normal obtain resources strategy strategy
achieve assists consuming maintain normal normal obtain resources strategy strategy
Sublist 3
alternatives considerable ensure technique
alternatives considerable ensure technique
Sublist 5
aware enabled networks
aware enabled networks
Sublist 6
bond bond initiated
bond bond initiated
Sublist 7
channel
channel
Sublist 8
eventually
eventually
Sublist 9
diminishes ethically ethically
diminishes ethically ethically
As we can see, there are almost no AWL words that I used more than once. Therefore, it is not necessary to look if there are other words that I could have used. But, during the self-editing steps, I noticed that I could have used some AWL words instead of words from the K1 or K2 category. When changing these words the following vocabulary profile results:
WEB VP OUTPUT FOR FILE: Day Chocolate
Words recategorized by user as 1k items (proper nouns etc): NONE (total 0 tokens)
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The profile shows that the percentage of AWL words increased form 8.33 percent to 10.85 percent and hereby increasing the academic value of this text.
Reflection:
This tool was absolutely useful, mainly due to its easy interface and clear structure. It is especially for someone like me, someone who has trouble implementing AWL words, a very helpful tool.

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